A Beautiful Bittersweet Memory Comments

Those beautiful moments we shared Almost made me forget what was at stake And as much as I've tried to hate you A beautiful bittersweet memory Is what you'll always remain Because I have more to lose now Then I do to gain But in the end I must admit... You were worth the pain. I like this one. Gives the thought that it was all for the best. Also like how you skillfully point out that the way things end up doesn't always tarnish your view of another person.

Tiger-very nice. I also love that song :) and I really like your poem it has partially inspired. Takes awhile to come to the final realization you did at the end but Im glad you did. Now you have closure and can start to move on. Really nice job-seems to be a bit different style than your last with the way you set up the verses. I like it.