Wednesday, October 7, 2009

A Beautiful Beach Of Danger! Comments

Rating: 3.9

Golden Moon has appeared high above the night Sea;
Heavy wind is blowing fast after a long spell of heat;
Sea looks beautiful enticing new comers to swim soon!
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 31 October 2009

Warning boards are displayed here and there for all to see; But who cares at them while enjoying comforts and beauty! Alertness when let loose men of ease can’t escape tight noose..turn against and face the conseqauences..it is not without any reason.... we are doing so much injustice to nature so are the bad results for us....beautiful poem o envy so much....10 read mine..machhu....life at obelisk..shall we die

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 12 October 2009

A really provocative piece and a compelling read. Great work

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Raj Nandy 11 October 2009

A nice poem, with the last line expressing proverbial truth! -Raj

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Carol Gall 07 October 2009

nicely written ramesh 10

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Shakuntala Sharma 07 October 2009

the enticing beauty of the night sea is nicely expressed

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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