What is beautiful aspect of life in general?
To be germ free by drinking water mineral?
To pass off peacefully and reaching the stage of funeral?
Or soldier reaching on top most post of General
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We really ought to aim for a smooth sailing at sea. But when the sea is rough we should learn to hold on to the mast. Thanks for this beautiful poem of yours. I learned a lot.
Rhythmic poem, having salutary words will help in the life. some paragraphs are in prose but not in glaring..
This poem is a well-thought-out revelation of life. Almost opening the vagaries of life in all aspects with a beautiful rhythmic flow in each stanza (quatrain) . A write that brings out the versatility of the poet in you. And an enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing.
a beautiful poe.really.the last parais very attractive too voted10 surya
Or soldier reaching on top most post of General