Sunday, July 13, 2008

A Beautiful Accident Comments

Rating: 4.8

This was an accident
It all happened here tonight
Preceeding a moment I lost my mind
And fell in love with you for the first time
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Aiden Florence
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C. P. Sharma 20 July 2008

In this waking dream 'all our yesterdays are lighted fools, the way to dusty death' and all our tomorrows are the beautiful accidents. That is how this dream perpetuates. Anyway, this is an impressive poem with keen philosophical insight. Using the words of Shelley, 'Our sweetest songs are those that tell of the saddest thought.'

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Niky M 16 July 2008

awww how sad but yet beautiful =] love it =]

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Casey Gauthier 13 July 2008

I do agree that it's sad but it's awesome :)

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Serenity Prayer 13 July 2008

is so sad, but i love it. i loved reading it. beautiful write. excellent job Aiden! ! keep it up! !

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: (, beautiful and sad at the same time, 'It all ends here When death do us part'- WOW, very strong, and so true. good write, astonishing...

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There is so much pain in your words...But I I can tell your going to be all right...Sometimes the best medicine is yourself...Don't be afraid to fall in love again...No matter if it's with the least likely person....You right beautifuly....Keep it up! !

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