the night like the rock
what is covering
entry to the cave
it doesn't let watch
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like actors at the scene are waiting then for good an entry and a happy end in order to return into the their a faces and to miss for the moment which passed perfect... hmmm night and its beauty, I can really feel what you expressed here..really a good poem.. your thoughts are some how innovative and the way you do is professional... well done frind 10/10
you are telling a truth...subtle way in short lines...you have good insight into your poem there, Dagmara Anna...10
I like it very much. It is a subtle, beautiful, well written poem. I am reading with pleasure. :)
the night which like a rock. i agree with you.i would like to invite you for read my poems