A Beating Soul Comments

I had to return and read this one again! All I can say is: BRAVO! I love the brevity, the soul, and the Mystery you've so masterfully presented here... amazing.

An eerie experience! Through the bizarre movement of the curtain, an extra terrestrial feel is powerfully imparted! Enjoyed!

This is a frightening administration when applied to the world itself. Very good indeed.

Interesting expression....quite a suspense!

lovely write... poured from a heart

Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.. Thank you for the beautiful comments for my poem Breaking news...Thanks a lot....

I could figure what comes next. Short but absolutely taking..i like it Mohabeer Beeharry

Great poem! ! ! ! Amazing last verse! ! ! I thought in my head....

An eerie atmosphere!

Interesting... mystical... like it!

So, where did your thoughts go from there? ? Regards...Sharon.

you are not alone! good awareness poem!

really amazing but poem is nice