A Beaten Heart Comments
I have a beaten heart
It's been that way from the very start.
As an infant it was harmed
God meant for this, don't be alarmed.
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Nice piece Debbie we who have heart problems (my heart attack was in 1987) can identify with this piece,
Those of us that have a beaten heart can identify with this poem. This is a very deep piece and I love the message at the end. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara
What a great poem.. it made me feel the hurt it's a very nice poem.. keep up the good work and hope we will be friends too: D
The sprit of who you are lights your words and touches me and fills me with inspiration. This is a truly touching piece.
I love the tone to your voice in this wonderful poem....you paint the picture of your pain through a smile....it brings hope to many that feel the same....it's a lovely piece to share 10
So well written and at the same time so much of a happy, and up beat attitude. Well inspiring be these words to life's fully challenged ways of strife! God bless us all-MJG.
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7/29/2025 5:27:34 PM # 1.0.0
wow thats a wonderful poem.... thanks for sharing it with me, with everyone. :)