A Beastly Machine Man Life! Comments

Man has become first class machine. Man made machine fails at the eleventh hour and this man has become slave of man made machine. This machine can work without proper care and fuel. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

Enlightened treatise on the problems with our mechanized and techno trends. We are slowly becoming servants to our own machines, but those machines are mindless and unfeeling. We no longer communicate by touch, smell or sense. We communicate in digitalized symbols and pictures. We pursue money which has never bought one shred of true happiness while nature is free and loves all. We fear being economically broke so we become emotionally broke.

Living away from Nature many are stranded nowhere, From where know not where to proceed or what to do! Mechanically trained in the name of discipline all lose all And never able to realise what is their natural self here! ...we should remainclose to nature..mechanical life leads us no where...very good write....10 read mien why are we close to nature...global warming...machhu

thoughtful--> compact--> beautiful! the signifieds denotatively explicited! 10+

I am the river, the river is me, together we will return, to the womb of the sea. 10

truth indeed...man has detached himself from nature

Ramesh, we are like minded yet again. Honest piece of poetry with good messages.10/10 Regards, Ian