A Beast Within Comments

woohooooo...see what we got here...i like it so much! the poem is so reflective to human. you are young but your think like so much experience u have...that's good.. i noticed u love to write it in dark background...very stylish on your way..this is signature of your poem..like it :) :)

Amazing write you have here

Wow..Speachless.unbelievable..are you really only 14?

incredible. loved the build-up of emotions. and the crux of the poem revealed with the stunning impact of a world-class magician. thanks for sharing.