Wednesday, October 1, 2008

A Beast By Any Other Name.... Comments

Rating: 5.0

I think I'd like to go to bed
And stay there for the day
Wallow in self pity
Have courtship with dismay
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Dee Daffodil
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Laurie Hill 10 February 2009

I like this very much

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Barry Van Allen 04 February 2009

Dee, Absolutely one of your best efforts! One can actually feel your pain while reading this one. B.V.A.

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Ershad Mazumder 16 October 2008

I love reading your poem dear Dee. You compose with full feelings.

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David Threadgold 02 October 2008

Hi Dee. A cracking read this one with great rhyme and rythme throughout. thanks very much for this **10** Regards Dave T

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Ency Bearis 01 October 2008

a soliloquy narrated well...longing not affecting self..good write.. Ency Bearis

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Nia Riz 01 October 2008

beautiful poem! ....i give it a full rating of 11/10.....amazingly written in such beautiful way that you made me read it once again...do write more of this sort....ciao...and take care

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Nia Riz 01 October 2008

beautiful poem! ....i give it a full rating of 11/10.....amazingly written in such beautiful way that you made me read it once again...do write more of this sort....ciao...and take care

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