I think I'd like to go to bed
And stay there for the day
Wallow in self pity
Have courtship with dismay
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Dee, Absolutely one of your best efforts! One can actually feel your pain while reading this one. B.V.A.
I love reading your poem dear Dee. You compose with full feelings.
Hi Dee. A cracking read this one with great rhyme and rythme throughout. thanks very much for this **10** Regards Dave T
a soliloquy narrated well...longing not affecting self..good write.. Ency Bearis
beautiful poem! ....i give it a full rating of 11/10.....amazingly written in such beautiful way that you made me read it once again...do write more of this sort....ciao...and take care
beautiful poem! ....i give it a full rating of 11/10.....amazingly written in such beautiful way that you made me read it once again...do write more of this sort....ciao...and take care
I like this very much