A Bear Came To Dinner Comments
A bear came to dinner;
He ate before the bell,
He didn't use his napkin,
I am here to tell.
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Lines 13 and 14 I would 'fine-tune', but it is another favorite stanza for me. I like the poem's humor. And I LICK DISHES ROUTINELY, both mine and my mate's. (not in restaurants) 4 stars. bri : )
Line 6: I'd delete the semicolon [; ]. Favorite lines: 'But balanced it, most perkily, Atop his brown-bear head.'
..........wonder if he thought you were goldilocks....so much fun to read....truly enjoyed..
Mascha Kaléko would be proud of you, Patti, and so would Ogden Nash! Well done!
This made me smile as well. Anyone would be lucky to meet such a bear.
This is just delightful, whimsical and well written in an Ogden Nash sort of silly joyousness. I could imagine reading this at bedtime to a wide eyed three or four year old with a giggle and kiss goodnight.
Love it! Love it! You must read mine - Where the Polar Winds Blow - Adeline
I am so glad that the bear did not eat you either Patti What a most fasinating bear that is But one can not help but love the hungry fella.......
Sounds like Winnie the pooh has let himself down yet again. Lovely poem.
An invitation to Big Brown BearThe bbq is on so come on over.
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7/26/2025 7:26:20 PM # 1.0.0
A five-star poem. Extremely well done.