Lonely as a cloud I was walking on the beach;
Pain of love lost I was trying to forget in Nature.
Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon.
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Lonely as a cloud I was walking on the beach; Pain of love lost I was trying to forget in Nature.....superb! Loved this fascinating poem dear poet.....top score!
Wonderful way of appreciating a Poet you know very well as an Art, my friend!
Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon. Moon light beam was falling on the dancing waves As light house beacon from the horizon to the shore Enlightening and guiding the sea faring boats there! Sense of loss and how the nature perceptions cure it. tony
Everyone’s life has a meaning for all to learn afterwards; But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time! .......// beautifully written; love it Sir
Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky....scintillating poetic expression my friend! Thoroughly enjoyed reading this magnificent piece of work......10
Well thought out and nicely penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.
Of late, you have read this poem of mine and thank you very much for your great appreciation of the poem, my friend!
Lovely poem with meaningful lines. The past love too as the light house beacon remains ..... But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time!
Thank you for your kind comment with lines quote from my poem above, my friend!
A beautiful resemblance of love, beauty and nature. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for your nice comment on the resemblance of love, beauty and Nature in my poem!
Love is natural, And, in this poem, I love the way you have shown the related similarities between love and nature itself. Beautifully done. 10
Thanks for your comment on the poem bringing out the related similarities between love and Nature!
Very beautiful here. You create an imagery of loss of a love. It was like watching a master painter. You captured this wonderfully. Excellent job.
Thanks a lot for your generous appreciation of this poem wonderfully excellent one!
Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon. Moon light beam was falling on the dancing waves As light house beacon from the horizon to the shore Enlightening and guiding the sea faring boats there.....lovely and powerful becan to convery the love message....very good piece...10 rad mine dilemma...step in stone...close the eyes
Ramesh, this is a beautiful poem about noticing things and nature. Bob 10+
'Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky' what a powerful expression of a universal reality!
Thanks for pointing out the universal reality of this poem, my friend!
Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky; But the past memory of love ever gives joy in dreams! Everyone’s life has a meaning for all to learn afterwards; But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time! -------- Another love painted in poignancy...well said...10/10
Thanks dear Catrina Heart for your beautiful comment and quotation from my poem!
very true sir...a painful joy it is......very nicely depicted
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