As I lay on my towel, eyes closed; I absorb all that surrounds me
The sun is out and the wind is calm so the beach is full
To my right I can hear the faint but continuous drone of cars
As more and more try to cram into the overcrowded field
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Marvelous scene you described! I could feel calmness washing over me like waves... Nice silent smile to have for oneself...
Sounds like you had a wonderful time. I'm glad. Lovely writing, the goods things in life are seldom written of, I commend you.
Very good poem, Daniel. Moments like this are among the treasures of life.
Great imagery...nice to be able to soak up the meaning of life. Liked it, great to read positive poetry for a change! -SG
I get the picture.