Thursday, September 4, 2008

A Beach Romance Comments

Rating: 4.0

We partied, shooting barcardi
Drunken, drained
And filled with love
The full moon lit the way
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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

A short and beautiful poem with nice imagery.

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Greenwolfe 1962 07 September 2008

This was prose written as a poem. It would have been a good one too. But it wasn't, though I did give it a recommendation. That is how close it came to being great. GW62

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Joseph Poewhit 04 September 2008

AND - you'll be sober long before the final number

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