Saturday, April 17, 2010

A Battered Wife Comments

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Where’s the smile
That you use to wear
I look at you
I don’t see it there
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Ray Hansell
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Shania K. Younce 16 March 2014

A very good poem. Bien!

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Ramesh Rai 12 November 2013

in our indian culture it is said wife is godess of home to maintain love peace prosperity. so nothing should b done to annoy her. moreover it is their responsibility to maintain. i regard your emottion.

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Babatunde Aremu 14 November 2012

What a pity! Many homes are traumatised today due to changed promises. The once beautiful flowers are being trampled upon. The world owe it a duty to make our homes sweet. Then the wives can smile once more. Good poem, I like it

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