Tuesday, May 5, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! A Basket Of Lemons- Senryo! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.7

Basket of lemons
At my door... ironical,
Who knew had sore throat...
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Mamta Agarwal
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Brian Jani 24 May 2014

Mamta you nailed this keep it up

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Allemagne Roßmann 29 September 2011

very well written lemony glimpse of life..

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

Lovely cluster...10

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Surya . 14 May 2009

a very thoughtfull and sensitive poem.posted 10 surya

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Sandra Fowler 14 May 2009

I picture your basket of lemons glowing in the strong sunlight like a still life painting. A very appealing image. Love, SandraX

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Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

lovely senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! nicely done.........

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Reshma Ramesh 13 May 2009

hehe sweet write................

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Kesav Easwaran 11 May 2009

lemons i like most...my first item in the morning is lime added black tea...i liked the 'lemonade' in your write, Mamta...tasty indeed...10

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 10 May 2009

Superbly written........lemons at my door

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Marilyn Lott 07 May 2009

What a wonderful and unique poem. I loved it! '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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premji premji 06 May 2009

lemons with words hidden within....................

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Tsira Goge 05 May 2009

Mamta, very beautiful picture - a basket with a lemons...I would add - honey, All best, Tsira

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