Saturday, February 11, 2012

A Basket Of Junes Comments

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I sit here
Sifting my basket of Junes
Birthdays and Sundays
And picnics
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Martin O'Neill
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Prasanna Kumari 11 November 2012

i think you should sift July, August and September as this made some sweet reading...

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Neil Crawford 21 March 2012

I really like this - it's a kind of verbal photograph but with far more dimensions.

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Sherrie Lowe 01 March 2012

What a beautifully visual poem, I felt I was there, and a wonderful title too, drew me to it straight away

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 29 February 2012

This is good...i like style of writing...kudos

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Juan Olivarez 21 February 2012

Nice and relaxing, conjures images of summer.

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Patti Masterman 17 February 2012

I LOVE the ending. We can learn so much from reading the poems of others, I feel bad many don't realize that..writing secret #1682 lol.

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Eric Cockrell 12 February 2012

love the picture you paint... and the kite you left in the tree!

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Sreelekha Premjit 11 February 2012

walking down memory lane.. what lingers are moments of joy with those loved.. i loved the thought and mostly the way you have presented it.. thanks for such a beautiful write.

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Martin O'Neill

Martin O'Neill

Solihull, Birmingham, England
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