Friday, October 1, 2021

A Basket Case Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was a private detective, and I was deemed one of the best,
As the colorful tulip fields, are forever attracting guests.

My skills seemed often in demand, and indeed kept me moving,
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
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Bharati Nayak 30 October 2021

A beautiful poem with a great story, enjoyed very much.I happened to read it in Bri Edward's October 2021 Showcase of poems.5 Stars for this wonderful poem.

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Bri Edwards 11 October 2021

I found quite a few nice rhymes and images here, BUT i don't really think you were a detective. And, what would become of all the baskets? ? ' : )

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Bri Edwards 11 October 2021

One of my favorite couplets: 'Finally a neighbor noted in passing, what a nice friend I had, To often leave me lovely gifts. I should be thankful and glad' bri ;)

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 October 2021

Wonderful, entertaining and with a meaningful message crafted brilliantly and beautifully expressed. A captivating story. Top Marks and to my Poem List.

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Shreya Hacks 03 October 2021

Thoughtful poem. As a clock's hands unwind, to create the sunlit, happy hours; And we should take advantage, before silk moonlight whispers.

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M Asim Nehal 03 October 2021

A fabulous write. I admire your writing skills.5*****

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 October 2021

Thank you Evelyn. Your poems are so lovely! Top marks

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 03 October 2021

Wow! Another great poem and a narration with beauty of lyrical verses.

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Kim Barney 02 October 2021

Great story, Evelyn! Loved it and gave it five stars!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 01 October 2021

26 Couplets, all with dazzling news about your dutiful job as an Agatha Christie, WOW! True fantastically worded and I have again enjoyed very very much these gorgeous words, dear Evelyn! 5 Stars full

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