A Barren Way Comments

t was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any say? ....... it like a wild dream......10

===== ‘Do nothing which spoils the core’ ~Universal Clock ~ ~Universal Symphony ~ ~Universal Harmony ~ ~Universal Synchrony ~ ~ Universal Unalloying … Let us find/discover/in-tune/enjoy all these with ‘feel good’ feel-no-bad’ and full contentment will deluge us…excellent composition Sir and is as always… thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 =========

It was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any say? ...barren n isolatedway...10

ou did lot of survey Found nothing to your dismay It was brazen and barren way How you could enjoy and have any sa, , , really it is barren way and can be found nothing....10

This barren way was barren also for me, . by reading and trying to understand all poet inside you wanted to describe.... there was some whiles I caught the right tone but presently I again lost myself and stopped. Of course it is not your fault I so hardly combated, It' s me who have to more try to grow up if ever when I will be able reaching up your level :)

This poem is very motivational! Very straight-forward, and positive; I love your focus on struggle and moving forward no matter what.

So long you write with rhythm! Perhaps many of your writing is such. Run poet, run long. You have good wishes to make the earth a place as heaven. Your fight is why so tough. But you have to move forward as long as you can. In this writing also reflects your philosophy. Well, write more, live long....... Regards, Apoet