A Barren Time Comments

wow.i guess the time was not barren after all...very beautiful

To cultivate a barren time To create a rose garden You entered into an unknown time, , , very simple and beautiful write indeed.... Dream ah! dream don't know what to say or to give to one of the great poet....a geniuses write rgds balouch

We embraced each other Slowly during a timelessness The barren time turns into A rose garden. ..wonderful concept.....

when you are inlove, you are inspired..grace

togetherness brings life and nurtures a garden of colorful moments

i loved the romantic setting of the poem u are really good at imagery stuff.great work.

Love is so creative. I love the first line of your poem 'To cultivate a barren time' Thanks.9 for this piece.

A lovely poem.............10++++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?

Love like rose trees needs constant attention to produce a beautiful flowering

rose garden - a good metaphor for any relationship and it takes time to develop such a relationship like a river flowing. I like the way you phrase it: “The river flowing from the moon” which is very suggestive of so many things.

Hello Ershad and wow, what a beautiful and romantic poem. Good read! Loyd

Very descriptive and impressive.Thank you sir for sharing your verses

Beyond the reality with fine imagination! This poem has the power to produce perfume inside the mind. thnx.

this is so beautiful, -turn barren time into a rose garden.10. i liked your imarery and choice of words, thanks

time filled with an embrace and the barreness turned into a rose garden, , , nice lines