Friday, August 9, 2013

A Bard Limp Stands Comments

Rating: 4.3

A Bard limp stands
Before the sea,
Resplendent in its majesty,
And envies it, this endless ocean,
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David McLansky
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Ramesh Rai 30 September 2013

Beautiful thoughts, expression, emotion, write. a natural enchanting verse. loved your write.

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Malini Kadir 19 September 2013

His cap is stuck with turf and hay His coat in strips wild flaps and flays; The wind whips up within the bay And gently chides him on his way; I could almost visualize these lines

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Valerie Dohren 09 August 2013

Excellent write, great rhymingand flow, and an interesting topic. Enjoyed.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 09 August 2013

His many songs on maidens lips; His merry jests, his joyful quips, Still spoken of in taverns round Which others might have written down now worn out and cast away! a delight to read these wonderful rhymes.

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