Wednesday, July 2, 2008

A Ballad To Loneliness Comments

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Loneliness is
A child spinning a top
On an abandoned sidewalk.
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Gone with the wind 02 July 2008

Very imaginative....simply great and the metaphor even greater. The images were woven very gently. A 10. Best wishes

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Mamta Agarwal 02 July 2008

what a lovely Ballad. you rightly ask if you were the top, sun, moon, rose petal, would there be loneliness

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