A tale,
Of two pals,
Ego possessed the former,
Self-respect imbibed the latter.
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It is so beautiful, written in narrative and set like a song, simple yet powerful.
An interesting poem. You have some good ideas and you appear to be ambitous. keep up the good work 10/10.
A reflective poem of simplicity yet with a strong message. If only more of the world belonged to the 'we/our' category. So much me, me, me!