A Ballad Of The Road In Village Comments

Your poem made me think only briefly of Frost, then I felt the pain and endurance of bearing the long straight road lacking choices. Your imagery was effective in conveying the scene as well as the theme. The final stanza pulled in the hope... In looking up to the sky and being still to the goal. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

Be still to the goal, and never lost in fuss As you wish to garden, must have those one day; The best is yet to be- - - - - -This thought leads us and holds our hand to help us reach our destination.Very nice.

'Along the road' of life. Nice work.

Though we have to travel through the tortuous roads of life, never get disheartened by the trials, but continue to move forward to reach our goals! Inspiring message Pijush!

A thought provoking poem in wisdom. Trials of the road, Trials of life. Goal setting in life inspite of the trials. misery and toil it's unflirting aim never lost to us.... Thought provoking. very good poem. thank you dear Poet for writing and publishing it.. tony

The trials of the road are not unlike the trials of life that can torture a soul if they are very heavy and can weigh on the mind and create a great deal of mental anguish. All is laid out well in this poem. Thank you for sharing it.

Thirst man knows the pain of thirst really and feels that he will die soon and water is needed for him immediately. Beside the road such a man travels and while does not get water feels so sad. This poem is entirely wisely composed and thought provoking. Amazing poem shared....10