'What ails you that you look so pale,
O fisher of the sea?'
''Tis for a mournful tale I own,
Fair maiden Marjorie.'
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Nothing like a good narrative poem. I prefer Lord Randal[ but this has a nice twist. The allusions are good.
What a beautiful ballad and ode to lost love! Very impressive writing technique. ~Besa
Sweet maiden, sweet love. Nice work.