Wednesday, September 29, 2010

A Ballad Of Marjorie Comments

Rating: 4.0

'What ails you that you look so pale,
O fisher of the sea?'
''Tis for a mournful tale I own,
Fair maiden Marjorie.'
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Dora Sigerson Shorter
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Edward Kofi Louis 21 June 2015

Sweet maiden, sweet love. Nice work.

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Francie Lynch 20 April 2014

Nothing like a good narrative poem. I prefer Lord Randal[ but this has a nice twist. The allusions are good.

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Besa Dede 22 April 2012

What a beautiful ballad and ode to lost love! Very impressive writing technique. ~Besa

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