Monday, November 11, 2013

A Ballad Of Love Comments

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She brought joy in my life,
Like the sun in the world,
All sorrows got the way out,
And she rained love upon me,
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Mohammad Muzzammil
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Faith Ali 28 December 2015

Well done for what you wrote... It's really sad that most of our dreams nowadays end in smoke. Being strong to face whatever you're going to meet in life is the only way to live happily, so be strong. Regards

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 February 2014

Muslims hav no caste barriers. Islam doesnt like caste discrimination. Anyway yor poem was poignant but written in a sensational fabulous style. Pls review my latest poem, 'selectin relaxation

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Mohammad Muzzammil

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