Monday, July 30, 2007

A Ballad Of Love And Lust Comments

Rating: 3.3

Are stolen fruits the most exciting?
Down on you with tongue delighting
As a butterfly lands on a flower
Then rough and wild hour on hour
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Linda Ori 07 November 2008

Well, now............ahemmmmmmmm.......let me catch my breath! If you call that a ballad, then I'm the Queen of Sheba! That was a rip-roaring feast of passion that begs to be screamed at the top of one's lungs. All I can say is I need a cigarette - and I don't smoke! Exhilarating read! Linda :) :)

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A lot of eroticism and passion in these words. Very interesting read.

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Colin J... 30 August 2007

Patrick, I would say you are one passionate kind of man. loved it, Colin J...

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Original Unknown Girl 30 August 2007

Wow P S Hogg, all this just because I was surfing the Top 100 UK poets! ! I've read this out to my room-mate (colleague that is..) and his answer was 'Well'! I think he found it as amusing as I! Brilliant rythym if you'll pardon the pun. Sounds like you both had a whale of a time.... and that's the point! Isn't it? HG: -) xx

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Marci Made 30 July 2007

Speaking of Lust......................etc............ who is she? ? ? ? ? marci.xo

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