Sunday, February 13, 2011
A Ballad In The Dark Comments
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Thick, and still, and dark was the room,
Black as the hidden side of the moon;
And I felt a mystery like I held a rune;
And a wind chime played, a whisper- a croon-
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7/19/2025 1:12:47 PM # 1.0.0
You have been bold to write four-line verses with all lines rhyming, and you have succeeded pretty well in making the rhymes natural; the refrain works well too. This is a good, atmospheric piece, and you should be pleased with it.