Friday, December 14, 2018

A Ballad For The Brokenhearted Comments

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I tripped into the crevice of your heart
And stumbled on a blanket of dead leaves.
I cried in shock - the land was torn apart,
Essence robbed by iron-hearted thieves.
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Sonya Annita Song
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C F 20 February 2019

I'll trade my garden for your lonely weed. Beautifully written ... your imagery, the flow of your words.... beautiful. Love especially these lines: How did I miss the tear stains on your sleeves? How did I turn to blindness with my greed?

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