Wednesday, November 23, 2011

A Ball Comments

Rating: 4.5

I want to go away
On a secret place
Where I can stand still
Where there is no race
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Jinal Oswal
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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

really a neat work...nicely written

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Joub Kahuria 10 February 2012

i love your point of view, some times we have to come face to face with truth, a discovery of what life really is.thanks for your comment on my poem SO MUCH

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Living Experience 05 December 2011

Nicely written, very expressive and I completely get it. Thanks for your comments too, I'm glad you were able to understand them. Love N Light

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Prabal Dahal 02 December 2011

Oh my... You must have been in a horrible mood while composing this poem... Still, you have expressed what you think is the truth about life very maturely. :)

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Sarvani Pochiraju 01 December 2011

Neat work. well done.Thanks for your comment on my poem.

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Sajna Kailas 29 November 2011

wow, considering life with a ball is an awesome thought, loved it! ! ! ! ! simlple words with complex thought! ! ! ! ! keep it up!

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Ramesh Rai 25 November 2011

think, I have been through all Life, for me is nothing but a ball A kick from here, a kick from there A goal! Or a ball without air nice and well versed. life is a ball.

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Jacqui Broad 24 November 2011

Jinal, this is a great poem! Many can relate, I believe. Life is a ball, yes, the earth is also round, no wonder we move in circles. The circle of life.

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