Monday, April 16, 2012

A Bait And I. Comments

Rating: 3.9

In the ocean of passion,
Reason has little liaison,
Fish abound, blink and twinkle,
Splash at the face to bloom and spring,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good write. I am going earnestly for the fishing in the oceans of blue and nothing.

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Dwayne Gordon 30 January 2013

Life becomes a dream to dream..... Brilliant work of art...

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Meera Panigrahi 09 September 2012

I am going to fish in the ocean of passion..... Lovely line

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Karen Sinclair 22 August 2012

The ratings on this piece as far as im concerned do not reflect how well this is written, it is so cleverly placed and perfectly put, you have a style which is very unique and i for one think it is marvellous and honest

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Roong S 19 July 2012

Wow..very beautiful! !

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Johnathan Juarez 12 May 2012

quirky and full of life. love it

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Dave Walker 16 April 2012

A wonderful poem, like it, a great write.

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