A Bag Of Air! Comments

Facing the muse of life with the works of nature. Thanks for sharing.

There is a time for everything For the bag with air, to be torn to nothing Thanks for sharing

really lovely and beautiful piece.

Thanks, a very good, inspiring and thought-provoking poem. Best Wishes, Merton Lee, Singapore

At times we may hold our heads so high that we refuse to see others as they are. When we do this we are compared to a bag of air that will soon deflate and show what we really are. Very good.

Once torn, the life is gone. When the plate is too hot, it will be dropped, as we drop. - a poem of clear imagery and ideas, VS...

very nice poem, i enjoyed,

Excellent presentation of various aspects of life in great flow like water. Loved reading

A poem which can just be termed as great. Thank you for gifting us with this.

Interesting write. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs

great poem, lovely thought

A really great poem, like it.