A Bad Poem (Competition) Comments

good use of rhyme, a rhythmic beauty.

Great rhyming Herbert, liked its simplicity but meaningful.

Good poem. Well penned and structured. Great use of language to rhyme time with about a dozen or so different words. Top marks! -Michael

Guess I missed that competition...LOL! But it's a pretty good poem none the less :) KK

Man, I am going to have to think about entering the competition. Your entry is pretty good! Dammit, give me a few days. I'm going to have to think about this.

This is an exceptionally good bad poem. Congratulations Herbie, you're a legend! love, Allie xxxxxxx