A Bad Dream Comments

so nice..^^..i wish i could write more..just like you

Nice poem I like it a lot

Bad or worse, good or nice there is a greater dream than dreams in this world.. That is our life, [' Zindagi kwab hai......Kwab me such hai..' ]You have said only the brighter side of it ina good manner. How about the other side of the coin..Write that too.

Society should read this poem as their guidelines of burden, solution and decision which have been enforced on them through materialistic and harsh world. Every decision made for certain matter shouldn't impair our judgment to decide what is right what is wrong. Sleepless night, overwhelm stress and fear are part of life but choosing the right way and correct path will allow us to see what is the core of our function in this world except fulfilling our needs and wishes. Excellent social critiques' poem.