She goes outside to escape the yelling between her parents. She sits
down and begins to cry. She looks up at the stars and thinks of him.
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a marvellous write and sure very touchy poem, you have a very good talent to make the feelings heidden in you poem...i loved it..thanks 10++++++ for this beautiful poem rgds asif
What a sad poem, but fantastic none the least. Well done.
oh how does the heart yearn for that perfect and strengthening bond called love, nice episode, i almost dreamt reading it!
=( its so sad.. very well written though. i could visualize the whole thing. great write, sad story.
Wonderful imagery. Bien!