Sunday, August 3, 2008

A Bad Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

She goes outside to escape the yelling between her parents. She sits

down and begins to cry. She looks up at the stars and thinks of him.
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Jessica Elizondo
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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

Wonderful imagery. Bien!

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Aijaz Asif 25 November 2008

a marvellous write and sure very touchy poem, you have a very good talent to make the feelings heidden in you poem...i loved it..thanks 10++++++ for this beautiful poem rgds asif

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Ashraful Musaddeq 16 September 2008

A very touchy beautiful poem, love it.

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Ian Singer 16 September 2008

wow how sad you are good write more

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<font color =fusha>Amy 14 September 2008

What a sad poem, but fantastic none the least. Well done.

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Anna jonson 23 August 2008

waaw that's all i can say.......waaaaaaaaaaw

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Obed Akuma 04 August 2008

oh how does the heart yearn for that perfect and strengthening bond called love, nice episode, i almost dreamt reading it!

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Serenity Prayer 03 August 2008

=( its so sad.. very well written though. i could visualize the whole thing. great write, sad story.

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Blessing Nanier 03 August 2008

woah.i could visualize the dream.what a poem

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