Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, August 3, 2010

A Bad Day Comments

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You may be stopped on the way
Friends and all may go away
Teacher may thrash you for home work
At home you will be punished for not using pork
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Sally Plumb Plumb 13 August 2010

Bad days pass into good ones.Nice poem.

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 06 August 2010

floating like lotus sailing like a boat surfing like a sledge want to write, like you!

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Rinki Nandy 05 August 2010

i like the last line really....it's not a bad day after all......

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Dwi Utami 04 August 2010

Bad day and beautiful day. You must enjoeyd all of day. Say not to bad day.. Just one..hope you never have bad day daily..: thumb: 10

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Darshna Chopra 04 August 2010

You may be stopped on the way Friends and all may go away Teacher may thrash you for home work.. it may happen some day also....10

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Maulin Shah 03 August 2010

No one may come near to you This is nothing but true... no good r, bad day it is bad time....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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