It's never the memories,
It's that hoarde of feelings
Leaves me empty of tears now,
Until my eyes are like stones,
...
Read full text
somehow lovely, and a little selfish.. hey wait, but isn't it how love works? good write..
It's never the memories, It's that hoarde of feelings Leaves me empty of tears now, Until my eyes are like stones, Simply Love the lines... Good one..
Great poem, very well written and I like the abrupt ending, 'Alone'.
An excellent write J.P.....and yes one sided but very revealing....thank you...Fi
A nice poem indeed. To me its like one sided love song. The poem could be understood better in the light of Freudian psychology. Best Wishes Naseer
i really like this poem. i can really relate to it, which makes me a bit sad, but happy as well. i especially like the ending.
Very good structure, that touch of sadness yet finish and why. Nice read
A well play of words depicting the effects of the much overlooked role emotions bond our hearts with