Saturday, August 15, 2009

A Baby What? Comments

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Now I was taken by surprise,
One day out of the blue,
When a friend said to me,
'Man, do I have news for you! '
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Loyd C Taylor Sr
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Marilyn Lott 22 August 2009

You gave me a chuckle, Loyd with this one. I've missed your wonderful writing style. You are a natural my friend. '10! ' Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Passionate Flower 15 August 2009

pretty comic conversation i like it thanx for share it with us best wishes regards

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Daryl Cheng 15 August 2009

I like this poem though I'm quite confused about the end of the poem. the dialogue was comical and you do have a peculiar way of writing: D

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