Tuesday, July 31, 2018

A Baby's First P++p.. (Haiku # 16 1/2) ....[ Inspired By Jez Brul's A Baby's First Smile (Haiku #16): P++p-Pail; Short, Of Course (The Poem, Silly!): Humorous ] ] Comments

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A baby's first p++p
Causes some consternation;
Open diaper pail!
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Bri Edwards
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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2018

An excellent Haiku! thanks to Jez for inspiring you! Enjoyed the humor....10

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Savita Tyagi 31 July 2018

On the contrary I think it is a matter of relief......baby is well....

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