A Baby's First P++p.. (Haiku # 16 1/2) ....[ Inspired By Jez Brul's A Baby's First Smile (Haiku #16): P++p-Pail; Short, Of Course (The Poem, Silly!): Humorous ] ] Poem by Bri Edwards

A Baby's First P++p.. (Haiku # 16 1/2) ....[ Inspired By Jez Brul's A Baby's First Smile (Haiku #16): P++p-Pail; Short, Of Course (The Poem, Silly!): Humorous ] ]

Rating: 5.0


A baby's first p++p
Causes some consternation;
Open diaper pail!

(July....31st....2018)

Tuesday, July 31, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,haiku,humorous
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
[ as PH has chosen to delete a very useful English word from
the title and text of my poem, i have substituted "+" for "o"
in the word. ]

: ( ha ha ha!

It's been said: "Where there's a will, there's a way." Sometimes there is also an inheritance!(that's a joke, using a 'play on words' re the word "will)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2018

An excellent Haiku! thanks to Jez for inspiring you! Enjoyed the humor....10

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Savita Tyagi 31 July 2018

On the contrary I think it is a matter of relief......baby is well....

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