a baby's chat goes on and on
it does not stop it with it's mom
a dog in the street
a leaf or a flower
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very well written makes you think and smile at the same time
DEAR SAMANYAN, THANKS FOR YOUR INVITE TO COMMENT ON AN INSIGHTFUL POEM. THIS SHOWS YOUR KEEN OBSERVATION AND PROFOUND EXPRESSION IN SIMPLE LANGUAGE. LIKED IT. A-10 FROM ME Rajkumar
It's true. You can have the grandest conversations with babies or even small children about nothing at all. But, in the end, it's worth every moment. Thanks for sharing.
A baby's language is inexplicable, not decipherable to anyone except mother.But everyone enjoy's the divine pleasure of communicating with the baby or just listening to the baby.Also the baby doesn't have any dearth of topics to speak on, as the poet says anything under the sun. Wonderfully expressed by the poet, putting his feet into the shoes of a baby.
Babies are special…their looks…their smiles…their croons…everything. Their twitter is equally special – it has an idyllic music about it. You’ve with beautiful imagery, captured the fascinating scene of the nascent. # 10.
what a lovely poem. i'm a mother of two girls and can easily relate to this poem. it reminded me of the lovely chats i had with my daughters. thanks
Its a well written piece though I felt the flow was a little inelegant occasionally.
If only a baby could write insightful poetry....... Love this poem Sir Lakshminarayanan! 10/10
Somehow I liked this poem more...For times to come every baby`s cry must be a sweet feeling; the true ethos of an identity very innocent.Thanks a lot.. you are an Asamanyan!
hehehe...... I feel like a cute baby again Sorry for the late response
nice write! ! ! ! baby's babble outsmarts all languages
a text or scripture of it we have in memory...i think thats what it should be. As we do recall distant memory of those little words and expression and impressions. A beautiful poem
A beautiful poem that speaks of a baby's chat, innocent like a flower, as green as a leaf, as pretty as a butterfly or bird - a unique poem that casts a spell. Thank you Samanyan for sharing such a delightful poem.
thanks a lot for that lovely comment