A Baby Dawn Comments

How true! In 60 years of his life time man confines himself in his beliefs and dogmas and goes on to inflict these dogmas on his fellows.... for an extra terrestrial heaven and a god, we refuse to look at the heaven and the god within us and our fellows......

'Yesterday was not a day... a nightmare' How lovely words! The whole piece is beautiful with deep sense. 10++

This is a very clear powerful and beautiful writing with a great series of word combinations that make this a joy to read. The core of this, however, is the message that it brings. A writing worth its salt. GW62

Very thought provoking........questioning our very life styles, our way of thinking, our mind sets......Very good.

Actually speaking, everybody is in search of peace and not war. This is to be clearly understood. The problem is that we seek this peace objectively and not subjectively. When it becomes a question of an objective search, we use all the permutations and combinations that our individual nature can warrant and the whole tangle crops up out of our immature nature. We should understand that a protester is also in search of more freedom and peace. We are suffering from mental slavery. So long as we try to get rid of this in an objective manner, the real solution will never be in sight. This is to be ridden by holistic thoughts. All true religions actually guide us to this path but who listens their voices? This is to be answered. Our lower, gross nature is to be lifted up. Only the individual can do. Remember the verses of Bhagavat Geetha 'Udharet aatmanam...' 'the same old man the same old religion the same old differences...and the same old voilence'. Let us stop repeating the same story. What we require is a solution. As poets, we should be able to supplement this. Otherwise, what is difference between the lamentation of a layman and a poet?

A page of eternal violence beautifully written with deep feeeling+++++++10 regards uavanice1

Reflection of recent violence makes all abhor fanatics forever!

Powerful & beautiful expression, without missing on fine imagery

This is a beautiful and very expressive poem, Samanyan, and though on such a sad subject, it is quite well written. As long as there are religious fanatics or to use a better word, terrorists, who decry the trampling on their own rights, but feel quite justified in slaughtering innocent women and children simply because they have different beliefs, the world will never no peace or harmony. Carl.

Any time, any moment of suffering no one is here my friend, except you and me to creat peace .......it is the rule here now, do us agree to treat ourselves the disease of our souls?

religious fanaticism can turn a human into a beast...well written!

meaningful thoughts... very meaningful lines of truth... really a substantial write... very matured and elegant piece.. 10++++

substantial write..great verses....

Your sincere words show up a world that, saddest of all, has lost the way to peace...... a well written and serious piece of wisdom......10 from Fay

Yes.....all are like to be there itself......rather seeing dawn......a beautiful verse and your poetic penning......you have expressed the pain too.... thanks for your kind sharing.

It saddens me how our world has gone, you have a unique way of writing it all down in wonderful verse, thanks 10 Lynda xx

Nice repeatition, words echoed in a very effective structure. Stunning flow and meaningful verses................10

This is the tragedy of life what we see in the world of today. God only can help this situation that is going from bad to worst every day.

What life brings...joy to all my friend....brilliant piece written with effortless flow...excellent job 10+

i really like truly the flow of msg in this poem.....it is very smart... naizz