Tuesday, July 7, 2009

A Baby Cries Comments

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a baby cries out
not knowing how much trouble hes in
only knowing about how he feels.
will he even realize it when hes 10?
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Kacey Hauck
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Jeremiah Shine 21 July 2009

I know what you mean! My complaint is the grammar and spelling.

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Keith Hendrickson 07 July 2009

'a baby cries out for he is th only 1 brave enough to show he needs help that he cant always be tough' wow hard to believe you are only 16. very nice piece of writting.

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