Friday, April 3, 2009

A Baby Born To A Teenage Mum Comments

Rating: 5.0

A baby born to a teenage mum,
a fashion accesory like a ring on her thumb.
She thinks it's cool, and he's so sweet.
with his tiny pink fingers, and his perfect little feet.
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Luwi Habte 21 September 2009

For christsake, the poem is terrible actually as i have to see it as apoem that is great nice one Luwi

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 10 June 2009

This is rather a very true depiction of one of the modern days dilemma that many females conceive during their teenage either by their own will with numbness overwhelming them and they fail to realize the side effects they would possibly face in future or the second reason is more dominant in developing states where illiteracy forces the women to have babies in teenage......and obviously the teenage gets stagnant with such activity leading to mental impairment of a female for she fails to recognize the lively experience at that particular age. Then parity at teenage is injurious to health of the mother and the baby..........a true depiction of a realy problem faced by many countries.......

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John-michael Baldy 06 April 2009

very nice poem i really understand the story behide it it show how teenage pergancy my look glomorece but is realyy sucks

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Anjali Sinha 06 April 2009

wowwwwwwww such a lovely poem Heath you talk of her sitting and watching Oprah I doubt she has time for that too must be only doing nappy washing and sterilizing bottles. I loved your poem --simply wonderful and nice eye opener for young teenage mothers tobe certainly A+++++++ and many 10sssssssss anjali

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