Monday, June 22, 2009

A Baby Angel Comments

Rating: 4.5

can't stop the flowing water
from mountains high
dropp to the depth of wisdom
down to the deepest ocean..
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lady grace
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Dwi Utami 03 August 2010

Can't stop the flowing water. From mountains high Dropp to the depth of wisdom down to the deepest ocean. Owww this is reality water never stop flowing forevermore..great of you tanks also for coment..+10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

‘Let X meet Y in the ‘tube of life’… after few months... comes a new life...’ Fine metaphors…wow! 10/10 [Gracefully] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 19 January 2010

Ur poems have a touch of Blake' Songs of Innocence' Very nice. touching the deep of the heart

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Melanie Johnson 30 December 2009

Hi lady grace! This is beautiful! ! ! I am now your biggest fan. :) Blessings, Melanie

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ngaio beck 06 November 2009

The joy of our humanity, treated with grace and elegance

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Eyan Desir 03 November 2009

Excellent poetic...write

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2009

let X meet Y in the tube of life lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while long days and long exciting nights after few months... comes a new life... what a lovely rehearsed poem with words and life and wish for exciting results after few months..All you have vividly expressed in few lines the bare facts of life..you desrve kodos for it.....10 read mine smiley...mother....mom i miss u

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

ha....please, can't take any more.i need a break...everyone as lovely as the next best.............and comments to die for as well scores of 10's

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John Mcmanus 14 September 2009

hi lady grace, very nice poem here, I like the way it conveys the joy of birth.

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Raj Nandy 20 August 2009

This is a nice poem with novelty in it! The title is also very appropriate! 10! -Raj

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Myrtle Thomas 07 July 2009

A way to look at life from another way to fertilize, although I do like the normal way! This reminds me of a poem I wrote on here called A BAG OF SEEDS, you might like it.I liked your subject and your form and flow very well penned.Great job

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Oneline Poet 06 July 2009

Wonderful idea.....well thought out.....flows nicely

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Jason Mcgookin 05 July 2009

a nice clean way of describing the works of what nature intended for us to do i never thought of it that way...read my first time we made love pls...

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dr veenaa rai 05 July 2009

what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey!

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dr veenaa rai 05 July 2009

what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey!

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dr veenaa rai 05 July 2009

what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey!

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Sanjib Das 04 July 2009

I dedicate this SONNET to your poetic genius: X and Y make a baby, We feel happy. Your poem is a message of a new comer, We are your admirer. You have poetic quality, We respect your dignity. Like your baby angel, we adore you, As a poet we, the reader, love you. I appreciate your poem, To me, you are a name. You write poem with your genius, You become an Icon to us. I dedicate this poem, Only to spread your fame.

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Christopher Flynn 03 July 2009

A baby angel to grace our hearts. From the firey passions That perpetuate our kind We create another life. Nice poem I like the use of nature and science in describing the human procreation

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 02 July 2009

'open the stamina of love spread the seeds of fertility blow the fire of passion to that sweet lovely beauty' so beautiful, stunning, thanks for sharing

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Chizitere Ojiaka 01 July 2009

This one is nice although i did not feel the emotions in the poem. I like your descriptions and your adjectives were just in place. It ie just a simple poem and i think it is good.

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