can't stop the flowing water
from mountains high
dropp to the depth of wisdom
down to the deepest ocean..
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‘Let X meet Y in the ‘tube of life’… after few months... comes a new life...’ Fine metaphors…wow! 10/10 [Gracefully] Ms. Nivedita UK
Ur poems have a touch of Blake' Songs of Innocence' Very nice. touching the deep of the heart
Hi lady grace! This is beautiful! ! ! I am now your biggest fan. :) Blessings, Melanie
let X meet Y in the tube of life lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while long days and long exciting nights after few months... comes a new life... what a lovely rehearsed poem with words and life and wish for exciting results after few months..All you have vividly expressed in few lines the bare facts of life..you desrve kodos for it.....10 read mine smiley...mother....mom i miss u
ha....please, can't take any more.i need a break...everyone as lovely as the next best.............and comments to die for as well scores of 10's
hi lady grace, very nice poem here, I like the way it conveys the joy of birth.
This is a nice poem with novelty in it! The title is also very appropriate! 10! -Raj
A way to look at life from another way to fertilize, although I do like the normal way! This reminds me of a poem I wrote on here called A BAG OF SEEDS, you might like it.I liked your subject and your form and flow very well penned.Great job
a nice clean way of describing the works of what nature intended for us to do i never thought of it that way...read my first time we made love pls...
I dedicate this SONNET to your poetic genius: X and Y make a baby, We feel happy. Your poem is a message of a new comer, We are your admirer. You have poetic quality, We respect your dignity. Like your baby angel, we adore you, As a poet we, the reader, love you. I appreciate your poem, To me, you are a name. You write poem with your genius, You become an Icon to us. I dedicate this poem, Only to spread your fame.
A baby angel to grace our hearts. From the firey passions That perpetuate our kind We create another life. Nice poem I like the use of nature and science in describing the human procreation
'open the stamina of love spread the seeds of fertility blow the fire of passion to that sweet lovely beauty' so beautiful, stunning, thanks for sharing
This one is nice although i did not feel the emotions in the poem. I like your descriptions and your adjectives were just in place. It ie just a simple poem and i think it is good.
Can't stop the flowing water. From mountains high Dropp to the depth of wisdom down to the deepest ocean. Owww this is reality water never stop flowing forevermore..great of you tanks also for coment..+10