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This is truly lovely work: -) Thank you for sharing......I live in Australia.....I'll keep an eye out for Betty for you x

A nice poem conceiving so innocently in search of a lost traveller. I look up to this like not many hearts may be took away some part of our heart in a short period of time though we remember them at last of our breath somewhere in our hearts

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing.....

very very touching dave....amazing how you still think of her.

A first rate story and well crafted penmanship from a great writer. Best wishes Dave. Sid.

Oh the pathos in this poem and such strong desire for there to be good reason for a follow up work...

sounds like a bit of a 'Titanic' love affair....so sweet and tender...it's amazing how one can connect with someone in such a short time....yet some still will not believe in love at first sight...and now the 'Internet Love' some not even seeing faces or hearing voices....to me everything is connected to words and how one relates...why many marriages fail....lack of words and communication...well I'm rattling on here...at any rate this was a wonderful moving poem...thanks for sharing Big Bruv: O)

i hope they can contact you.Mind you, there might be readers here who know them, too