A Ambiguous Music Of Love Comments

A nice poetic imagination, Nilima. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

Hi Nilima, A very poignant poem. A hard look at this wonderful phenomenon called Life. I became totally bewildered may be was missing the passionate silence, that was whispering a lot without making any noise. Everyone stands bewildered on the shores of this intrigue-LIFE. Still the river is flowing and am too with all its up and downs. I don't know about those eyes; either closed or hold the story still alive! As Dharmaputra says in Mahabharata in spite of all the vagaries of life, though we can not fathom what the very next second holds for us, all of us so passionate of life. We scheme, plan, expect, love adore, adorn..... What an intrigue! ! ! ! I do not find another word that suits here. Great poem Nilima.10++++

A ambiguous music of love was drifting on the ocean of my heart. And finally the fragrance of moderated emotion propelled me to sink into the depth of the river. Beautiful write by imagery! 10+, thanks for sharing

Love.....ambiguous......it appears often....great..you have not fallen into its clutches.....but with the passage of time it appears funny.....against this background you exercise your pen to recollect something.....which has found expression in your emotional write.....lovely musings...

A beautiful poem, Nilima. Thank you