Friday, May 1, 2009

A Alcoholic's Puppy Dog Happiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

I dog fooded long gone I home come
Miles high respect I for animal dumb,
He me look see I love him
Unconditional licking him no whim.
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Ken e Hall
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Patti Masterman 08 October 2009

This was real interesting and had a good flow from start to finish.

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Shashendra Amalshan 07 August 2009

hey this one is so coooooooooollllllllllllllllllllll! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! something different, innovative.. I mean I read this one like two or three times.. i should say very amusing and entertaining.... Hey I have an addiction for video games, .... some say game fanatic's show hallmarks of alcohol addiction.., so it is the same.! ! ! ! PH helps to get away from that though.. and reference to puppy, now if the puppy drank the drink it can be turn out to be a funny scene too! ! ! ! ! ! anyway i enjoyed this one, nice word play here, I like when some one do something out of the conventional norms...... reading this one was a novel xp for me.. full marks.. love shan

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