Tuesday, December 5, 2006

(a) 7 (Love/Passion) A Sanctuary Comments

Rating: 5.0

For weeks I looked and searched in vain
When you were the only cure to my pain..
Just one of your gaze was enough to quench
the thirst of my heart that was wrenched
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
COMMENTS
Original Unknown Girl 06 December 2006

So tender..... this poem is filled with love and longing..... Great write.... have to agree with Fran, the last stanza steals the show and completes it! HG: -)

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Francesca Johnson 06 December 2006

I like this poem for its openness and innocence. Especially liked the line 'Make my heart your sanctuary and nest where your soul can always come and rest.' Lovely! Love, Fran xx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 06 December 2006

Impassioned beauty and sesual delivery...A fine penning, T.O. fjr

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