Friday, September 1, 2006

(a) 6 (Love/Passion) A Sensuous Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was drunk with the sobriety of my love
Wandering with a passion of a possessed soul
Swimming in the azure waters of my wonderous cove
Thought that I had discovered love that was whole
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Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean
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Catastrophe King 30 August 2007

My Response TO: A Sensuous Dream It ai’nt easy, just to get high within the soberness of love; Like meandering with the obsession of a crazed spirit! While floating on the blue waters off her amazing bay – Thinking, that she has finally realized the complete love! Now, he radiantly glows from the depth of his vibrant heart; And enlightens those fabled revelry in her famished heart! Now, she sings that soulful song from her blazing heart; And wishes to capitulate and be immortal within his love! Just to be immortal, is her wish forever within his radiance; And, immortal within the universe just like the fire or the rain! It was her rapture & elation, as she let her splendor dance; With strength, she gives this free rein to her ecstatic spirit! Fully reincarnated she had felt, as he rested his eyes on her; Thus, she rejoiced the lexis & showered with the carousing! For her, it was a sunup of anticipation, as she felt his kiss; Then she realized that it was just only in her indolent dream! Now, she reclaimed her mind trapped in this eternal ecstasy Awakened and astounded, there she is now facing daylight; Just to remember this dream, yet alive in the depth of her sleep!

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Asma Bahrainwala 15 September 2006

indeed very 'sensuous' and appealing... intoxicated with love...an amazing opening line...

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Melvina Germain 08 September 2006

This is absolutely beautiful Tranquil, a very emotional and senuous poem-loved it--Melvina

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R H 06 September 2006

The passion poured out of this dream-inspired write. Justine

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Duncan Wyllie 03 September 2006

You have shown all the light and colour of your beautiful words Amazing write Love duncan X

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Nalini Hebbar 01 September 2006

very deeply emotional poem written very beautifully...loved it TO...love...nalini

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Steve Hagget 01 September 2006

Loved it - really passionate and so well put together - Steve

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 September 2006

YOU GO T. O.>>>>Passion perfect Poem, my dear....Solid Write'''''''''''''''FJR

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Preeti - is here! 01 September 2006

Queen, you are 'the poetry queen'...this is so amazing, very well written too, never gets boring, i didn't lose interest in it and the words lead me right through your dream! Preets

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Drunk on your dream, T O - this is masterful. It carries the reader away. t x

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